Comments : Apricot Nation

  • 3 years ago

    by Wuggleberry

    That's intense but really good. I'm not a fan of maggots but your images are so realistic. The word fear really put everything into perspective

  • 3 years ago

    by Hellon

    Abed..Abed...this so so intense...I LOVE it!!!

    as you know.*cough* I will always have suggestions so, here we go...

    Or maybe he was the black cat
    that leaped once out of the blue (I think it should be leapt...the corrector is saying no but English dictionary says yes)
    and landed with a grimace
    right before me.
    It made me believe to this date (date? do you mean day?)
    that black cats are bad luck
    and should be avoided.

    Truth is, I wish I can recall


    everything else is past tense so it should be 'could' I think...

  • 3 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Wonderful, Abed. The raw disgust in the apricot image followed by the decision to avoid: you have captured the essence of the fear experience.

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations Abed on your win

    Michael :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Scott Cole

    Congratulations on ur win!!!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations Abed

  • 3 years ago

    by Ren

    I'm at a loss for words...but am thoroughly covered in chills.

    Congrats on the win for such an amazing write!


  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish was as if I was reading a story which caught my
    attention till the end! What a write and a well deserved Win!!!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congrts abed

  • 3 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Such a powerful, deep look into the life of fear, the many forms and shapes it takes, and how it can grow into what we may not even recognize anymore.

    Great to see you back with more poetry, Abed. Congrats on the win.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is fascinating to say the least