Comments : Night Stalker

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is not just your usual normal stalker...he is the one
    who calculates, weighs and measures and decides if its your
    time or not...as I read it I could on;y get the vision of "death"
    scary...and I like the layout of this poem!

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you Meena

      I wanted to something a little twisty but with a little twisty ending also lol

      Craig x

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Clever Craig! I wasn't sure where you were going until the end. Well done-

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I wasn't sure where I was going either

      I had the idea but I wanted to do something away from rhyming. Rhymes are what I'm good at as they just flow things like this you have to construct. For me I find it difficult and nearly ended rhyming by accident

      Chuffed you liked it

      Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is fab Craig :)

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers Mt Em hope you are well

      Craig x

  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Judging Comment - Night Stalker by CJ Maleney points 4 - a very clever piece which got me thinking and I came to the conclusion it was about people “night stalking” here on pnq.