Love the flow of this poem but most of all love how sultry and seductive it sounds without being vulgar.

William I adore this! As Brise said, it's not vulgar but is a beautiful expression of 'love at play' and the bond you've described is intimate and powerful. Fantastic flowing rhyme and I'm happy to have nominated it. :-) x
=^.^=

Your words always carry such melody, William, not least because of your delicate language and effortless rhyme.

Take care

Oh wow!

I second that wow....elequent in all ways.

This is beautiful and well written! I love this

Beautiful and passionate. Your rhythm is indeed great!

Passionate indeed and its written without been too explicit
too..its the art of making love without making love....(if that
made sense) :)