A tragedy...a long awaited mother's wish shattered and
along with her world she dies...and the man who loved her dear
goes along with a broken heart...all at once...this is true love.

You have a way of telling stories and that too beautifully with
rhymes and well chosen words...

Its good to see you write again...keep penning my friend :)

A superb tragedy with excellent rhyming. I just love your style of writing. This is something that I could read over and over again. Very well written. Milly x