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by Dagmar Wilson
Hi Michael such amazing words and I truly wished that people could and would follow. Take care and all the best
Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x
by Ben Pickard
Great stuff, Michael. I keep promising myself that I will give this form a go but end up conveniently avoiding it!
You will Ben at some point, and thanks fella :)
Michael, niiiiiccccceeeeee.....you have more guts to undertake this than me, lol...a good solid message in this write also.
Ah thank you Miss Brenda :)x
and for your niiiicccceee nomination
Michael me old fruit this is exceptional, your forms is impeccable and it's content couldn't be truer. ..If I had my nominations back I would nominate but I'm still on "newbie" status lol
nice work fella
Thank you Ben, that's a fine compliment in itself fella. Much appreciated :)
by - Mr. Darcy
ah, at last - a shadow I can ask in - ah
Ah - ah! indeed Mr D
by Meena Krish
First off let me say well done with the form Shadow Sonnet and
the message within is something we all should try and follow.
Now here is a form I need to have a go at! Well done!!
Just a few things I would like to say and I hope you don't mind.
flow with the heart and writing will flow
^^this has only 9 syllabus instead of 10
pain we will share and show others our pain
^^this actually has 11 syllabus because "our" if I'm not
mistaken is 2 syllabus
These are just a few and I hope I've not offended you or
said anything wrong.
Keep penning...take care
Thank Meena, and not at all I appreciate your keen eye :)
'our' is actually one syllable (thank goodness) and I have now added believe it or not an 'our' in that line of nine - now ten
Thank you again :)x
by Milly Hayward
An excellent piece Michael with great technique in what is for most a difficult form. With a wonderful message to the world too. Loved it. Milly x
Thank you Miss Milly :)x