Nothing's Left

by Nicholas Kerst   Jul 11, 2004


If everything was all of a sudden,
Taken away,
Would I care?,
I didn't think so,

But when it was,
I couldn't think,
I couldn't breath,
I couldn't bear the feeling anymore,

So now nothing matters anymore,
Not school,
Not friends,
Not even life,

Now that everything is gone,
And nothing is left,
No love, sadness,
Or even hatred or anger,

All my emotions,
And all my feelings,
Have been striped away from me,
And I feel like an apple without a core,

And there's no point left,
I am pointlessly walking around,
In what's left of my mind,
Waiting for that to be taken also,

And then I will be,
Nothing more ,
Then a body without a,
Heart, mind, or soul,
I will be alone,
In nothingness,
On my own,
As if I never existed,

The ones who notice I'm gone wont care,
And the ones who do care wont notice,
It's the opposite of what it should be,
But now there's nothing I can do about that,

I wont bother trying to save myself,
Because I am the one who did this,
I am the one who made a deal with the devil,
And now I must pay the price,

I can feel the last thought in my mind being taken away,
So I say goodbye to this faithful world,
Full of nothingness,
Yet there is so much you can take from it,

And all the opposites that engulf me,
Love and Hate,
Black and white,
Light and darkness,

I once again bid farewell,
And I hope I never see you again.

I think this is also one of my worst...but the other one i thought was one of my worst is still at 5.0..so...anyways..you be the jugde.
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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I think it's very good, and i feel like this back then, my friends, my family and the one i love doesn't seem to care, so i didn't care either until now that i know they really loves me.