Comments : Fade to Blue - Lost in the Sky

  • 4 years ago

    by BeachBlunt

    I adore your wording. & it is very sad how two people can drift apart so quick. Such a touching, emotional peice.

  • 4 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This hit home. Nominated. All the best

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    There is a genuine and unsettling sadness to this piece, Larry, not least because of how many people succumb to this deadly and silent assassin.

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    So true Larry. It can happen and you can be right there. Well done-

  • 4 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh Larry this is beautiful yet so very sad and definitely hit home for me too

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    So powerful in such few lines, Larry.

  • 3 years ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    This is such an amazing and relatable poem. The way you captured the emotions of seeing someone you were once so close with drift away before you even realise what's happening is absolutely beautiful :)