Marky - you are really getting brilliant at these...
this is such a sad piece of loss, yet hope for the future...
well done..

This is a beauty Mark, well done fella

Michael :)

Beautiful imagery and full of emotion. A great piece. Milly x

Nature is the best healer. Very well expressed!

Congrats on the win

What a beautiful and elegant poem,
filled with luscious nature, I can spot the ivy
hanging within a cool night breeze.

I'm all about the visuals and this poem is detailed
with elegant visual beauty!

judges comment

A bit of an oldy worldy tongue twister for my 10 points this week. Every syllable sticks out a leg to trip you up. The flow is as smooth as the surface of the moon, the imagery dives right out of the poem. Yet I kept coming back and re-reading then reading again as it was fascinating. A real head scratcher that I could probably write a thesis on. There's a feast of poetry here, worthy of my 10. well done. (10 points.)