Oh yes, I like this. :0)
Nominated

Wow Miss Dagmar - this is Dagmar good! ;) albeit a sad theme, really love the way you weaved this one lady :)
Hats off! and hugs
Michael x

Imagery is so vivid and the sadness just
stands out...line by line it can be seen...it
can be felt...take care

Congratulations, Dagmar!

Great win!

This gave me chills. Amazing job on a much deserved win! Congrats!

Congrats Dag on your deserved WIN!

Judging comment:

The imagery is vivid and each sentence very strong; the descriptions are dark pulling in the reader to notice the sadness and darkness in each and every word written. The Nightshift brought to me a sense of hell in a different way too when it mentioned a long hall way and fingerprints on the wall (of a certain kind of monster perhaps). Although really sad, it is beautifully written and portrays a level of strength in the writer to me to have been able to bring out feelings from inside onto paper.