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by Mr. Darcy
I like the no nonsense, menacing tone you use throughout this. I would not want to be the 'mister' opening this letter bomb!
by Kitty Cat Lady
Lol, thanks Mr D :-) x
Brilliant lady, I hear that "SNAP" from here! This one certainly tells another in no uncertain terms
Lol, I'm glad you heard it Michael! :-) :-) x
by Milly Hayward
Superb, I think this will appeal to anyone with such a person in their life. Very descriptive and loved that final SNAP. Eloquently great as usual. Milly x
Aw thanks so much lovely Milly :-) x
You go girl! A strong write and deserving swift kick to this man, awful lout that he is! Well done-
Haha! You do make me laugh! Thanks lovely lady :-) x
Kitty, a well written poem with sharp and direct tone. It will surely help all the women going through situations like these in their life.
Thanks so much for your comments :-) x
by Ben Pickard
If I've offended you thus, I am truly sorry dear woman...
No, seriously, this is scathingly good and, well, snappy!
Take care, Kitty
Well Ben! Pfffft!
Lol :-) thanks for the giggle :-) x
by CJ Maleney
This is absolutely brilliant.
No one needs a relationship like that but it sounds like you have it well under control
It's all good :-) thanks so much for nominating this Craig. I really appreciate it :-) xx
by Em (marmite)
KCL firstly glad to see this nominated. Secondly we all have our times when things have built up so much that we just snap. X
Thanks lovely Em xx
by William Mae
A very good write, I enjoyed it, we all have a limit we can be pushed, and you have the talent to put that limit into poetry.
Lovely comments, thanks so much William :-) x