I like the no nonsense, menacing tone you use throughout this. I would not want to be the 'mister' opening this letter bomb!
V. Good.

Brilliant lady, I hear that "SNAP" from here! This one certainly tells another in no uncertain terms
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Superb, I think this will appeal to anyone with such a person in their life. Very descriptive and loved that final SNAP. Eloquently great as usual. Milly x

You go girl! A strong write and deserving swift kick to this man, awful lout that he is! Well done-

Kitty, a well written poem with sharp and direct tone. It will surely help all the women going through situations like these in their life.

If I've offended you thus, I am truly sorry dear woman...

No, seriously, this is scathingly good and, well, snappy!

Take care, Kitty

This is absolutely brilliant.

No one needs a relationship like that but it sounds like you have it well under control

Craig x

KCL firstly glad to see this nominated. Secondly we all have our times when things have built up so much that we just snap. X

A very good write, I enjoyed it, we all have a limit we can be pushed, and you have the talent to put that limit into poetry.