Comments : anxiety (acrostic)

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    That is the best description of that feeling I have ever encountered.

    Acrostic poems are tricky in ways. Yes they are easy to write but it's not easy to convey exactly what you intended when you first started writing it.

    This does a fantastic job of tying mind and body.

    I've only recently stumbled upon your work but I intend to stumble upon many more.

    Regards dude

    Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    With my anxiety reaching an all time high recently, I can absolutely agree with Craig. You capture these feelings perfectly. Fantastic job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, I can't believe I missed this one. In future, when I go to the doctor's and he asks what's wrong, I will simply take him a print out of this marvellous and chilling sort of acrostic.

    • 7 years ago

      by Em (marmite)

      Good idea!!

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Good idea...
      This was easy, I just described how I often feel.
      I hope highlighting it will help.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Mr D this is just... I'm lost for words and well you know that's difficult lol

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Suckling those jaw breakers again, Em?

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mr Darcy.. Michael..
    I was reading this and I know exactly how you feel..
    I am so glad this is up for nomination.. Truely.

    Excellent job in expressing it..

    • 7 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Anxiety seems to be a taboo subject to talk about. People are embarrassed to discuss this with others. It's ironic really, as talking about anxiety will actually help.
      Thanks for your comment.