Comments : little flower

  • 7 years ago

    by Blank

    Such beautiful things never last, it's a sad truth.
    Beautiful poem, the whole thing made me tear, definetly deserves a nomination.

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you.

      I'm pleased you enjoyed it

      Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi Craig.

    I liked this so much I decided to write a condensed version. Thanks for the inspiration.

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you I'll take a peek in a bit

      Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Craig

    This is a lovely poem, and the ironic end so sad, but true.
    Well done fella, love this :)

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks Michael.

      Just a simple little write but I'm chuffed a few of you like it

      Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    The last line just stole my heart

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I'm pleased you liked it and thank you for the nomination.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I love this poem- just love it

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Thank you little Miss maple tree x

    • 7 years ago

      by Ben Pickard

      So happy for you, Craig; fully deserved

  • 7 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful win Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Lovely. Well done x

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    In just five lines there is beauty, feelings and a little warmth
    with an ending and a truth that all good things come to an end
    and that applies in every aspect of life doesn't it....take care

    Congrats on the Win :)

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you Meena.

      Don't know what's happening but sometimes I don't see comment notifications.

      Sorry for via slow reply

      Craig x

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is a unique twist to a metaphor
    that has been written of before,
    I can't get enough of this poem
    and just how beautiful it is.

    There is so much beauty and sorrow
    mixed within this rich little poem- its just wonderful!

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you so much for your comments and your vote. Means a lot and lovely to know who it was.

      Craig xx

  • 6 years ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Such a beautiful but sad little write! I was transfixed from the start ...and so sad at the end for this "little flower! "( I will have seconds thoughts before pulling a flower again lol. )
    Brilliant poem that drew me in and has been a deserved win :D
    All the best ~Olwin.

  • 6 years ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Such a beautiful but sad little write! I was transfixed from the start ...and so sad at the end for this "little flower! "( I will have seconds thoughts before pulling a flower again lol. )
    Brilliant poem that drew me in and has been a deserved win :D
    All the best ~Olwin.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you I had forgotten about this poem

      Regards

      Craig

  • 4 years ago

    by Paul H

    A poem to ponder. Such pathos in so few lines.