Nice poem inspired by a tragic event. I'd love to make one when I get inspired. Keep up. :)

An inspired piece that raises awareness of tragic events. A captivating and emotional read. Milly x

Poemelo,

Congratulations on your win this week
Michael :)

Congrats on the win!

Judges comments

Battlefield (by Poemelo ) 10 points

War is a terrible thing and yet so many amazing works of art are borne from that horror.

This poem, in my eyes depicts the true cost of war. It is not about the soldier or the general, it's about the effects those people have on innocent lives.

War exist in many ways. Either nation against nation or within ourselves. There will always be a victor and there will always be a cost.

This conveys the true cost.

With regard to its writing and conveyance! The poem is brilliant although I think there is a type error or two which could have been easily addressed.

Regardless of these minor things it is a very well worked and captivating poem.

A credit to its author