Yes, yes, yes! I was waiting for you to post this lol.
This reminded me of verse found in young adult books and was literally so refreshing to read because of how much the words moved on their own. It played out like a movie in my mind and I love the kind of badass ending of Gloria walking away victorious. The description in this kept me on my toes and the suspense was fun as usually I don't read a poem feeling that. And yes, although this was darker and obviously categorized as horror, I found this to be right down my alley.
Thanks - Rania's contest really did produce some inspired writes. The serial killer theme was one I've been chewing over for a few weeks now, so I guess this was the result! lol
I am glad you liked it. :O)