A deep piece that reeks of pain and the destruction of self wrought about by self. A thought provoking piece that I needed to read several times. The title "A key to Happiness" at first gives the impression of a poem that will be light and provide a key to happiness but the poem itself reveals a more darker view. A tantalising piece that is somewhat haunting. At the end of it all happiness is a state of mind that fills the moments between joy and pain. Milly x
The title leads the,reader away from what
the reader might have thought it would be.
The start was inviting but the soft tone of
the words carry a weight of sadness and
pain...touching write with something for
the reader to ponder about...