by Ben Pickard
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Brilliantly done. |
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Excellent. You absolutely nailed the two forms in one. The Palindrome is difficult enough without it being an acrostic. Glad to see it nominated and it goes straight to my favourites list. Best wishes Milly x |
by Brenda
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Meena, amazing write! You took two and blended them seamlessly. Well done- |
by Michael
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Two great styles coming together, nicely done Meena |
by Mr. Darcy
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wow wee :O) |
by Unknown
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To me, forming two forms is difficult in itself but you've done it flawlessly. Awesome job. Congrats on the win! |
by Hope
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Great poem....wonderful! |
by Hope
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Please forgive me....if I take this. |
by yogi73
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This is so creative. I really like your word choice and phrasing. It really has a dark and deathly touch |
by Em (marmite)
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Death (Acrostic & Palindrome) by meena Krish points 4 - this piece really enthralled me because of the short lines maybe it's something to do with the palindrome within the acrostic or it's just because the whole piece was about death which here seemed so suddenly but I felt myself catching my breath a few times, which was far from a bad thing |
by CJ Maleney
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