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by Ben Pickard
A wonderful use of metaphor, Michael, likening your children to opposite but beautiful flavours.
Well done and all the best
Thank you Ben
Ah Michael, love this! It's just beautiful!
Thank you Miss Brenda :)x
by - Mr. Darcy
Children arguably evoke the most powerful of questions: which one do you love most? This of course is impossible to answer when you love them for who they are.
To make the poem more personal, perhaps?
flavours of my life
such beautiful opposites
both crème de la creme
Either way, lovely work.
Thanks Mr D, and that maybe a good decision :)
by Meena Krish
This brought a smile to my face and just with those few lines
I feel the love and the delight which lies in these words..lovely!
Thank you Meena :)x
by CJ Maleney
Or combined like Oreos.
haha, indeed fella, thank you :)