Wonderful use of metaphor throughout, Scott. Well written.

All the best as ever,
Ben

Liked very much the weaving of cookery metaphors and rhyming in this piece. Stimulating visuals. Milly x

I like the metaphors you have used and the way you have
penned this with perfect rhyme and rhythm about tears. The way
its formed, developed and then released...nicely penned!

Thank u

Using cookery as a metaphor for tear production is a good one. I was chopping onions last night and they were flowing, I can tell you!
Very original and very good.

Astounding work Mr