Comments : Shrink My Heart

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh my goodness!!! Glad to see this nominated that is all x

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Magnificent.. superb rhyming and imagery and emotion that leaps from the page. Really glad to see it nominated. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Mark,
    Such a beautiful piece of love captured with intense imagery. Rhymed with perfection and passion.
    Wonderful fella
    M :)

  • 5 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Glad this was nominated!!! Excellent piece

  • 5 years ago

    by Darren

    judges comment
    You cant help but feel the pain and anguish when reading this piece.
    It has very vivid and powerful imagery throughout. I love how the poet has cleverly used alternative ways of describing the word 'heart' some very inventive. I'm not usually much of a fan of punctuation, however with this piece it works and is as important as the word choice used throughout. A very descriptive and emotional write that gets my 10 points this week.