Comments : The Galaxy Of White

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Bob,
    Nice imagery here in your poem, at first I thought you were a swan!
    M :)

    • 7 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thanks Mechael, Haha Andrea and Others call me that.
      I rather to call it as Hans Christian Andersen : Ugly Duckling. The one whose quack quack doesn't conform.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A fairy tale sort of that has grace which some fail to
    see its true beauty..nicely penned my friend :)

  • 7 years ago

    by D.

    This is my favourite I’ve read from you. The flow is smooth without appearing songlike, and your word choice here is really adept in places. Really enjoyed it