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Excellent as always SC..
Such a way with words.
Thanks USB, glad you like it :)
by Victoria Ramey
Beautifully written. Each line pulsed with emotion. Vividly sound.
Thanks Victoria, glad you found it so :)
That last stanza not only summed up the emotion for me. "Into the cold that screwed me", chills.
Thanks for reading. Glad you like it and to know the ending works :)
Maher, always wonderful to read your pieces. This is chilling to think of how an ended relationship can be, cold, hard, and hurtful. Well done-
Thanks Brenda, it certainly is a heavy thought. Glad you enjoyed it :)
by - Mr. Darcy
Mather, I could hear the music see the sea waves delivering the salt into those wounds on your exposed raw heart.
Take it easy, man.
Thanks my man, glad you liked it. Stay safe :)