Comments : Hindsight (song)

  • 9 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent as always SC..
    Such a way with words.

    • 9 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks USB, glad you like it :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Victoria Ramey

    Beautifully written. Each line pulsed with emotion. Vividly sound.
    Great job!

    • 9 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Victoria, glad you found it so :)

  • 9 months ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    That last stanza not only summed up the emotion for me. "Into the cold that screwed me", chills.

    • 9 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks for reading. Glad you like it and to know the ending works :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    Maher, always wonderful to read your pieces. This is chilling to think of how an ended relationship can be, cold, hard, and hurtful. Well done-

    • 9 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, it certainly is a heavy thought. Glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 8 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Mather, I could hear the music see the sea waves delivering the salt into those wounds on your exposed raw heart.
    Take it easy, man.

    • 8 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks my man, glad you liked it. Stay safe :)