Comments : A Life of Pretending

  • 5 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I raise the glass to my lips -
    a drink I do not need

    This line.. damm. I know I've read this, but still.. such a powerful piece. Showing how we try to fit in with those around us..

    Excellent piece S.

  • 5 years ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    The third stanza is breathtaking. This piece was so vivid and relatable, Great poem.

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Stephen, it's hard when you feel alone in a room full of people drinking, socializing. Sending silent pleas for help that no one is sensing is excruciating. We are here for you Stephen, never forget that. If you need ever to talk, I'm here..