This had a calming effect on me, like I was reading whilst sailing on the the gently rolling seas...

Lovely.

Calming, soothing and just dazzling <3

Definitely a soothing piece. I liked very much the overall imagery and calmness it conjured.
Milly x

'Weary Serenity'
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Great title. To me this suggested an outward calm and ease that is often attributed to someone/thing who portrays serenity with no effort at all.

In two stanzas we see her just being her - in a world/time and place not necessarily of here. I like how this made me view a timeless image in my mind.

Take care.

I know I'm just going to mirror what everyone else has said, but it's really telling when a few lines can inspire that serenity. I love the kind of "ebb and flow" I feel from this, the sense of direction and exploration, neatly written in these few lines.

<3