Comments : "Desire" (Rondeau)

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Beautiful Michael. There is someone out there that will appreciate your special gifts. I hope cupids arrow finds it mark.

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Bless you Miss Brenda, lovely worrds :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    I can only hope to write this form this well one day. Brilliant piece!!!

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you, lovely comments :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Brilliant Michael. Hugs to you

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful Michael!

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful piece. You deserve a whole bow of cupids arrows... Loved this. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Michael

      Bless you Miss Milly, such a nice comment :)x

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Robin hood, robin hood riding through the glen...
    Lol
    I was trying to write a Rondeau the other day and gave up after a few hours. I find if you use the wrong rhyming words, you quickly run out of material.
    You though have made it look easy. I've read this out loud and it sounds superb. The refrain can sometimes sound forced, but again, yours flows well throughout.
    Super poem. Bravo.

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    ...Robin Hood, Robin Hood
    Trying to build a den..

    Thank you Mr D, lovely comments, much appreciated :)