Comments : Exit Wounds

  • 5 months ago

    by DarkNDangerous

    This flowed so well for the rhyme scheme you chose. The emotion in this poem portrays so well. Great poem!

  • 5 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Your verses are brimming with intensity and a dismal anticipation of what will come... this is a powerful portrayal and that mention of "supernova" makes me think of something that we hold dear, our own potential to be great, yet collapsing under the weight of all we could be.