Comments : Yuki-Musume (The Daughter of the Snow)

  • 7 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    The only word I can use to describe how I felt after reading this is "entranced". Just like with your previous poems, I love the lore, the depth of it and how you put a real voice to this story. This was just as mesmerizing especially how you noted she can show mercy.

    Enjoyed reading this immensely!

    • 7 months ago

      by Daniel

      Thank you MA! I’m trying to spend a great deal of time on these so I’m happy it comes through. :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Star

    What are you doing Daniel? You keep writing those mesmerizing poems, and I cant wait to read more; I really hope there is more :)

    • 7 months ago

      by Daniel

      There will be more. I’m very glad you’re enjoying them! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Like the bitter wind, your writing takes my breath away. As for your foot fetish, leave them wanting to know more. . .

    • 7 months ago

      by Daniel

      Hahaha, I tried to shoe horn my fetish in subtly. Trying to keep you on your toes. Next time I’ll leave a foot note. Sorry about the puns ;)