Gorgeous...

Just beautiful.. so sad and haunting.

So very well written Adreamer.
the way you have described such a loss with such wonderful imagery

M :)

I just read the words you left behind and only one word...
Blo-somm!

Very powerful poem, Adreamer! The poem was launched with power and ended with power. I LOVE this style and could definitely keep on reading this piece all over again, too. Amazing work.

Wow...simply beautiful yet its a strong write of emotions
that is been held by patience yet the pain behind it is enormous...
a touching write...congrats on the win!