Comments : As time goes-by

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This has my final nomination and deserves the front page, in my opinion. Fluent rhyming throughout. The only suggestion I would make, Michael, "Your heart was wrapped in strands OF gold". I think without the 'of' it just drops a beat there (to me anyway).
    Wonderful work, as ever.

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben, most appreciated fella... and yes doh forgot the 'of' thanks for pointing this out :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Michael, what a beautiful piece!

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Brenda :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This has been written so sentimentally beautiful and the rhymes
    were all spot on without any interruptions and at the same time
    the picture it painted was moving...well done...take care

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Meena :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Omg Michael this is absolutely beautiful. Add to my favorite. Hugs to you

    • 2 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Added to faves that is all.
    Take care kind sir. Xx

  • 2 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Oh my god. This broke my heart, and really impressed me. The style reminded me of an old favourite poem - Music I Heard by Conrad Aiken, (look it up). The structure, the flow, the word choice and sentiments, it's all well combined and touches the reader's heart. Thank you for sharing, I hope it goes to the front page!

  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    I know times pass, and life goes on
    but thoughts of you are never gone.
    So seasons pass, i’m here today
    and hope you hear, the words I say.

    Perfect rhyming, Heartfelt
    Star poet