Comments : Blackberries

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some wonderful imagery throughout and fluently rhymed.

    All the best

    • 2 months ago

      by Zia Mikaela

      I am really insecure about the flow of my poems,
      They tend to be riddled with overthinking nonsense.

      Thank you so much, Ben.
      I feel so happy you liked it :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    I really liked this a lot.

    • 2 months ago

      by Zia Mikaela

      Thank you, Brenda! *high-fives you*

  • 2 months ago

    by Daniel

    Congratulations on the win. There’s some very lovely imagery throughout this. Happy to see it on the front page!

    • 2 months ago

      by Zia Mikaela

      I never would've thought my poems would get noticed like that.
      I am so thankful! I was always doubtful when i write poetry. I always thought my poems
      were not good enough, like it was such a waste reading them...

      Somehow, I feel so happy and grateful. I hope i could reach out to more people and inspire them.
      Again, thank you, Daniel :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    What a front-page worthy poem, Zia. The imagery and words flowed so well from the 1st line to the last word. Well done! Looking forward to read more of your work.

    • 2 months ago

      by Zia Mikaela

      Thank you so much! It means so much to me <3
      I will do my best and keep on writing! I hope you get to read more of my works in the future!

  • 2 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Somehow the title throws the reader off a direction but
    as I read it there is a deeper feeling and atmosphere to it all. A worthy win indeed...Congrats!

  • 2 months ago

    by Ya----Na

    Zia welcome to the site. Your writing style is unique.

    • 2 months ago

      by Zia Mikaela

      Thank you! I enjoy being here! :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    Simply great.
    Though I find it hard relating the title to the message.
    Good one