A melancholy piece. There is something about walking through the surf that brings such clarity of thought and which can make a person feel quite alone even on the sunniest of days. Sending you a warm hugs and much love. Milly x

Miss Dagmar,

A lovely little piece of nostalgia you have written here. Gentle imagery that makes this a lovely read.
Hugs to you, M :)x

There is something soft about this that coexists with the sadness of missing a loved one...

“this ribbon in my hair I am ready to set it free”
^
I love this part, it feels like being ready to let go, but the absence of the person is still hanging to you..

As the sea breeze plucked
your ribbon from my fingers

my lonely tears fell

Gorgeous x

Dagmar, this may well be my favourite from you.

All the very best as ever.

Great poem