Comments : Global Warming - Rondeau

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This fast moving piece is a great depiction of that speed of trying to get down on paper all the wonderful creative thoughts that usually asail the mind during dreams. Wouldn't it be great if such creativity appeared on demand during waking hours? An enjoyable read. Milly x

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Everlasting

      Thanks Milly, it is great when it appears on demand.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Lucero. I find this form rather hard but you've done really well here.

    Take care

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Ben. It’s challenging. Though one of my favorite forms.

  • 4 weeks ago

    by S.T.A.R.

    I love this !! it flows smoothly, and feels like a soft dream :)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Michael

    These are not easy to master, this is a great effort you have written here :), M

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Brenda

    Beautifully written, not an easy form to do. I felt your struggle with the words flowing in your dreams, waking up, frantically writing before that stream goes dry. Well done-

  • 4 weeks ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    It's nice to see a rondeau from you. Your expertise with meter lends this form to your poetic hand. The fact you've used the refrain to show how we now are just hoping for a miracle, anything to reverse our destruction of our world as we know it. 'at night I dream' - it's at night when our worries make us fret and keeps sleep away. I just hope if this phenomenon effect enough people global warming maybe prevented. I can but dream.