This fast moving piece is a great depiction of that speed of trying to get down on paper all the wonderful creative thoughts that usually asail the mind during dreams. Wouldn't it be great if such creativity appeared on demand during waking hours? An enjoyable read. Milly x
It's nice to see a rondeau from you. Your expertise with meter lends this form to your poetic hand. The fact you've used the refrain to show how we now are just hoping for a miracle, anything to reverse our destruction of our world as we know it. 'at night I dream' - it's at night when our worries make us fret and keeps sleep away. I just hope if this phenomenon effect enough people global warming maybe prevented. I can but dream.