Comments : Love is ( cinquain )

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    You have captured really well the essence of true love in this tiny package. True love does wash over you like an ocean and makes one feel alive. Lovely Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Love is a vast ocean and never stops
    giving...nicely penned :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely put Lee! I feel like that, love is a wonderful experience!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well, this is a lovely little piece.

    Thanks for posting.

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this and so sorry I missed this.
    If I dare say, a little risky. X

    • 6 years ago

      by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

      Whats a little risky? ... Youve lost me...! Sorry... Haha
      ( I'm a wee bit slow sometimes lolol)

      But glad you liked the poem! :D and didn miss it completely! HA

      All the best ~ Olwin Lee :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Wham! Beautiful... the ocean I could hear while reading your poem :)
    Keep writing my lady friend M

    • 6 years ago

      by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

      Thank you so much Michael ! :)
      .... Your comment means s lot. And I'll keep penning ! :D
      ~ Olwin