Comments : Shunned

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Oh my goodness this is super cool written. To bad I don't have a vote left. This deserves the front page. Goes in my favorite. Hugs to you

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you Dagmar :) I'm trying to be more creative :) Hope you are well sending you hugs right back xx

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this Milly! Wonderfully written and rhymed. Nominated!

  • 6 years ago

    by Vanesa

    Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing.

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    this my dear is cooler than a frogs dangly bits.

    loved the style and flow of it.

    • 6 years ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Thank you :) I think it's going to be a little bit like marmite love it or hate it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Fabulous piece with a rhyming scheme that's extremely difficult to do but you pulled it off well, as always :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is more like it, Milly.
    I love the rhyme and the dark sad twist at the end which felled me. X

  • 6 years ago

    by D.

    Hahaha this is great. Love the comic ending :) well done Milly!