Comments : Take Me In Autumn

  • 4 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just beautiful Mark...fall is my favorite season. I told my girls I want my ashes spread up north at my favorite falls in the fall.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautifully done, Mark. You really are a dab hand at this sonnet lark.

    All the best

  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    DEAR MEMBERS: I wanted to nominate the poem from my own account but nominated the poem by mistake from the Mod account rather than from this account. Sorry for the inconvenience. I thought I got logged out.

    As for Mark. The piece is such a gem. The style, the structure, the word choice, the story behind it and the emotions within it. It all gave me a special feeling. It is a special poem.

    Fall is my favorite time of the year. And you have displayed life lessons beautifully and intertwined them with nature's seasons.

    I hope others see the beauty of this piece as much as I have.

  • 4 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Mark, Rania, I would have nominated this too, so all is well.

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Wow, this is really superb. I love the powerful imagery - an emotional piece that is tied up nicely in the last couplet. - straight to my favourites. Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    Mark, this is sublime fella :)

  • 4 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Lovely, Mark!