Comments : "Primordial"

  • 4 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is bloody amazing. So so my kinda twisty, a little dark and a little true to being.

    love it.

    Regards

    Craig

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This is an amazing write and the fourth stanza just blew me away
    "Innocence was Decapitated,
    By the monster
    called Man.
    A mindless force
    that could be harnessed
    for any purposeless endeavor."

    I really hope there is someone out there who still has a spare nomination. Superb... Milly x