Comments : Luxpiritus

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely original piece.. There is something quite wonderful reading about a rare and unique creature of mythical beginnings. (Congratulations by the way) Best wishes Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by Everlasting

    The clink- clink reminded me of a poem I wrote a looooong time ago. Lol Funny how one or two words can spark a light in our memories. I liked the poem. For some unknown reason I find it cute. It might have been the effect the words bling-bling clink clink chink chink creates in me.

    Good one.

    • 4 months ago

      by Star

      Thank you Milly and Lucero ^_^
      And yes that happens to me too!!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Sorry I missed this one, STAR. I haven't been commenting too much recently, but I really did enjoy this and (naturally) loved the rhyming throughout!

    All the very best as ever

    • 3 months ago

      by Star

      Thaaaaank youuu, and it’s OK. I’m not commenting much as well :)