Comments : Death is My Name

  • 4 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You might be the only person who satisfied with a death analogy that meets my own reflections on death. You have made significance with this poem. I can't even start breaking the poem, the depth in each part is so heavy I can barely handle a pinch of its philosophy, but that's why I'm a fan.

    Indeed, death will always be the one floating part above this drowning world. In death, we conceal all the pain and misfortunes that we have lived. And oh how beautiful your words are and how special your imagination is.

    I veil
    the hurt of existence with art;
    ^
    Splendid.

    Your closing lines are everything. I can't choose which of your poems is my favorite. Thank you for sharing. I do find relief in your words.

    • 4 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you so much, Rania, for your words. It is so great that you are not afraid of seeing things from a different perspective. That not only illustrates your insight but a brave spirit that is not afraid of new perspectives.