Comments : In the Mirror of a Kiss

  • 6 years ago

    by Rob

    Beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Every butterfly portioned us
    with the scope of its splendour,
    perched us in its wings,
    every lavish candelabrum
    in the scales of its lustre,
    every lover
    in the combustion
    of its passion,
    it's lust.

    ^ did you mean it’s or its lust?

    As affirming it is lust?

    • 6 years ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank I did not see that. Spelling correction automatically turned it to it's because it was the beginning of the sentence, according to 'porose'.