Comments : Say Goodbye (Rondeau)

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A superb Rondeau. Great rhyming. An emotional well written piece. I think this very relatable and a pleasure to read a little used form. Milly x

    • 3 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Milly. I prefer using this form for more romantic poems but it just sort of happened! :-) x
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      ... And thanks so much for nominating it x

  • 3 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I don't think I got to say welcome back, Kitty, but glad to see you posting again. I felt an earnest yearning to just be free of this, of waiting and being patient yet being left in the dust again. There's a maturity in this, a desire to move ahead so that hope isn't crushed and in turn, becomes bitterness or hate. It's hard because this seems quite personal and emotional, like we can't always halt our own progress or happiness to keep giving this person more chances, more opportunities when they need to realize that themselves. You have a life, a purpose beyond this and this person perhaps keeps dragging you down, trying to give more and more reasons when there aren't.

    • 3 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Hi M A and thanks for the welcome back :-) Your interpretation of this has laser-like accuracy and you've made some points that I wasn't even aware of when writing it! Thank you :-) x
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