I don’t like my past

by Albert Titus   Oct 6, 2019


There was a boy that
have a great daughter.
He was so happy
it was great.

But the girl have a
plane to kill the kid
and she was a demon

She kill the kid on
his birthday and
his dead on the
Inside but he
find god and bless

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  • 6 years ago

    by Robert Long

    *hugs* that's really deep and it felt like I was there witnessing it.

    Things aren't easy and I'm sorry to hear all that. Always here if you want to chat.

    Only thing I'd suggest is more flow in the middle. It seems like you were thinking of something then the train on the railroads collide.

    I'd love to see more from you

    -Robert Long