Comments : Fresh Water ( Writing Prompt)

  • 6 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautifully written! Glad you're posting these :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Well composed Everlasting :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Love this, Lucero. It was one of your tongue-twisters I managed to decipher! Great work