Seeing past fake love

by Eric   Nov 10, 2019


(Havent written a new one for awhile glad to share one that I'm making off the top of my head. It's just for the fun free forming a new topic for a fun challenge to myself.:)

Revoked and out of town
Otherside of the road
Wrong side of the law
A cowboys rides
Keeping his blackend crown

Ghostriding to hells end
The journey beyond the darkness
A shadow once brightend
Slayer of dreams
Building the flame that fuels the grim

Viscosity to paint your merry ball
Entrusted with the mess we make
Hindering your mind
Oblivion suffers without you
Join your dream with every flaw

Golden sunset on the horizon
Covered with clouds
Heavy drops begin to pelt
Deeper past what we once felt
Mountains peak past a dandylion.

You ain't dandy and you lyin',,'

1


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Some great imagery throughout this piece, Eric. Thanks for sharing.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 4 years ago

      by Eric

      Thanks and you the same