Comments : Good-bye Fall

  • 8 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

  • 8 months ago

    by Daniel

    Other than the word ‘juxtaposition’, which I feel is a little jarring, this is a lovely, warm ode to the passing of autumn :)

    • 8 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Daniel. It was very jarring to be a part of this. I live in lower Michigan and we see very little snow and its usually not staying until January. We got close to a foot of it and frigid temps. Fall was gone overnight. Thankfully it warmed back up again and the trees started shedding their leaves so it's not so weird out there.

  • 8 months ago

    by Mark

    Wow, what a creative view of the fall. Beautiful poem!

    • 8 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Mark!

  • 8 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a truly beautifully written piece of poetry, Brenda. Some lovely imagery and subtle uses of alliteration throughout.

    All the very best to you as ever,

    Ben

    • 8 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Ben! I appreciate you, it was such a weird weather change. I felt better after writing this.

  • 8 months ago

    by Angie

    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful and imaginative portrayal of fall. loved it. Milly x

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Milly!

  • 7 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    A poem about fall with a touch of creative images for the reader to see and feel.liked the read.. well penned!

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Meena! I appreciate you -

  • 6 months ago

    by Koan

    Autumn in Canada is gorgeous just as this poem...
    I loved it, thank you for the read.

    • 6 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much! Autumn is my favorite season, it is so inspiring.

  • 6 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Oh dear, Jack frost and his premature snow storm is an unwelcome sight.

    Great imagery here, Brenda.

    Missed you xx

    • 6 months ago

      by Brenda

      Awww, thank you Michael! I have missed you too!

  • 5 months ago

    by Tony Grannell

    Hello Brenda,
    Wonderful observations of autumn and composed with poetic flair and a keen sense of expression, as in, ‘donned her widow weeds’, picture-perfect. All in all, a marvellous poem.
    Regards, Tony.

    • 4 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much Tony! I appreciate your thoughts and comments.