Comments : The Leaves and Paradise

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    I really like this Everlasting, that comes with a message for sure :) leaves keep the earth alive! Nicely done, M :)

  • 1 month ago

    by hiraeth

    "Its as if the ground
    was a Heaven for those leaves
    while for us
    a Hell we try so hard
    to escape"

    uh, wow. im at a loss for words right now, but hopefully i'll have something by the time this hits front page!!

    • 1 month ago

      by Daniel

      I agree with the above ^ wonderful ending to a thoughtful and poignant piece!

    • 1 month ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Mark and Daniel.

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    Such a beautiful win!

  • 1 month ago

    by Angie

    Its a no wonder this was a win... congrats! Quite a powerful message within your words and beautifully written