Comments : I'm Sorry I Won't Be Home Tonight

  • 7 months ago

    by Nat Quillan

    This was a quick attempt at a first poem on this site, so enjoy.

  • 7 months ago

    by hiraeth

    A harrowing write, welcome to P&Q! Hope to see more from you!

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done, welcome to P&Q! Looking forward to reading more-

  • 6 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Written with a delicate tone, a tenderness despite the heavy sadness. Also, the name "Clementine" is beautiful and has a sort of innocence to it. I like that you included a name, making it more personal and the "Mrs Mulligan" as well, it made everything more haunting.

    Oh and welcome to PnQ! Can't wait to read what you share on here!