Comments : A poem about a dead father

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Death of a loved one is always difficult and loss of a parent or child always so much more. Sometimes imagining that they are still with us makes it more easy to live with. Warm hugs Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I remember when we were in the same club a long time ago before anything had happened to your dad, you always wrote about him and specially how he spoiled you (in a good way). Reading this piece brings tears to my eyes. It makes me hard to believe reality. But it also makes me happy to see that your dad is still with you even if it’s in memories. It also makes me appreciate even more my parents. Thank you for sharing.

  • 4 years ago

    by Star

    Judging Comment:

    This is one of the poems, where you find yourself unable to leave a comment. The memory of a beloved one that still feels so fresh, and is still and will always linger around.
    “In these few seconds
    before the truth
    hits me like a bite of frost,”
    ^
    I gasped after reading this part, and suddenly became chilly. The part is what made me grasp the feelings within this poem.
    This is a sad and impactful poem!!