Comments : From The Other Side (The message of a martyred soldier)

  • 6 years ago

    by Everlasting

    And asudden you realize
    you’ve also jumped over death
    You leave behind your life
    but you keep on going running

    ^^ typo? Did you mean “and suddenly”?
    Did you mean, “you keep on going, on running, on waking up from this nightmare? “

    • 6 years ago

      by ddavidd

      https://www.thefreedictionary.com/asudden

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thanks for sharing the link. I googled it but I didn’t get anything other than “sudden.” Never mind on my first comment. Glad to see you posting again.

    • 6 years ago

      by ddavidd

      asudden adv =in an abrupt manner

      Nice to be back.
      It is the desire to be read by people like you that brings me back.