Comments : Liverpool

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    A nice tribute to your city Daniel and well written of course, M :)

    • 4 years ago

      by D.

      Thanks Michael, David. It’s a wonderful city :)

  • 4 years ago

    by ddavidd

    Now after this Liverpool mesmerizingly seems pulling

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I liked the rhymes, as that's not something I see often in your poetry, and the way these lines were phrased as questions... there's such an easy flow, a yearning to reminisce and re-discover this person as you learn and walk around and within the city.

    Lovely.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    It's your use of half rhyme that makes this excellent, Daniel. It means nothing sounds forced and all is subtle!

    Great stuff. Well done.

    • 4 years ago

      by D.

      Thank you Ben, MaryAnne! Always means a lot coming from you guys :)