Comments : the lightkeeper.

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, this it truly beautiful. I love your imagery of the winter and the lights. Your pieces are a joy to read.

    • 7 months ago

      by hiraeth

      Thank you Brenda!

  • 7 months ago

    by Koan

    It is beautiful... Your poem has such tranquil voice... Truly enjoyed it

  • 6 months ago

    by Rania Moallem

    I melt*

    It's shame that I'm always busy now and I don't get to read your poems on spot as before. I am so sad I couldn't read this one, in particular, before now. What an absolutely absolute poem. Your words do so much, they are drastic.

    i refuse to believe that light was
    destined to live such a woeful life.
    ^I wish i can replace comments with sound effects for lines like these. They poke the heart.

    And then that last verse, i could imagine myself lost in a vast angry sea on a dark night with some light emerging warming the surface and I reaching for that savor.

    I am left with so many emotions reading and actually find myself in your lines here. It's on my favorites.

  • 3 months ago

    by Brittany Ottmo

    I like this a lot! It has good imagery and makes me believe in the light again! Thank you! ????