I WILL LIGHT UP THE HEAVENS - ALEXIS KARPOUZOS

by alexis karpouzos   Feb 4, 2020


i will light up the heavens just with your kisses
and thousand suns will flow on thee,
the divine shiver will wrap your body,
the fire of eternity will burn
every drop of your blood.
Now, your heart will stoped
and will start to beat on the tune of eternity.

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  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A quick suggestion, I think the second line would flow better as "and a thousand suns" instead of "and thousand suns". I also believe the second to last line would sound better as "stop", instead of "stopped" in the past tense.

    I liked the "divine shiver" - it felt unique and I don't think I've heard that before.

    A short but passionate piece!

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